Friday 4 November 2011

Script

First of all we'll have a tracking over the shoulder shot to show where ash is walking too, Ashley walks into school looking at the floor and barely looking up.
A long shot of Ashley about to turn the corner into one of the doors
Ashley opens the door and slowly walks in using cut away and mid shots, not taking his head up from the floor. By now he is drenched due to the rain.
Ashley slowly stamps down the corridor for a few steps till he is bang in the middle of the corridor...
A high angled mid shot will be used of everyone walking around him, showing him isolated.
Then it will cut to him sitting in a class room. A tracking close up going all around his head, showing how emotionless his face is. Then cut back to the corridor when it reaches half way going round his head. A ots shot of a surge of people rushing towards him will be shown, and Ashley still stands there, staring towards the ground without a move.
Cuts away back to the classroom, and its still very isolated. The tracking shot of around his head finishes and we are stuck with a close up of his face. A tear drops and a cutaway to that tear is shown. then we cut back to the corridor, where every ones in their classroom after hearing the school alarm so nobodies around. Ashley then turns around, looking ready to walk out of school, shown by a long shot, but very visibly sticks his hand into his right pocket using a mid shot from below. We cut back to the classroom where Ashley puts his hand in his right pocket and pulls out a mobile phone, we cut back quicker to the Ashley in the corridor, about to read something on his phone. Then cut back to the classroom, and show a cutaway of the text which states "sorry Ashley, i don't think me and you are working out x"
Then it cuts back towards the corridor and you see a mid shot from behind of him about to throw the phone, you see the phone hit the wall and then it cuts back to the classroom of him finally losing it and jumping out his seat kicking chairs around, shown by mid shots and long shots.
Then cuts back to the corridor scene when the girl he broke up with walks into the corridor late and looks straight into Ashley's face... And a action reaction, ots shot is shown to show both peoples reactions.

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